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The Color of Danger
Author: Iggy
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(Added on Aug 19, 2012)
(This month 83289 readers) (Total 97748 readers) |
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A girl's chastity self-bondage goes horribly wrong--a cautionary tale. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Kira
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Nov 23, 2014 |
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excellent work, well written, thanks for sharing (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
iceblock
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Aug 26, 2012 |
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How good's this? Leaves you wanting more. No review, i don't review stuff that is better than i can write, just a thanks for your efforts Iggy! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Aug 26, 2012 |
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I agree with graymangazer, except that I found the level of characterization acceptable for a story this short. The two friends were pretty interchangeable, but there was a notable distinction between the roommate and her friends. (9/10)
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graymangazer
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Aug 22, 2012 |
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This is a plot that`s been used many times and will probably be used again. However it`s an excellent story. Short and to the point, a nice way to spend a few minutes.
There`s not much characterization and the action is rather brief but it is well described and hot, the permanence is a great twist and we`re left imagining what might happen next.
I would love to read an expanded version, what`s going to happen to Lily? will the girls dominate her some more? will she ever escape the locks? There are so many more things that could be done with this story. I hope there is more planned. All in all a very enjoyable tale. Thanks. (9/10)
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