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Morning Call Author: slavegirl1
(Added on Mar 4, 2012) (This month 49934 readers) (Total 54775 readers)
Young couple's morning endevours

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Weighed Average (?): (6.5/10)
Average Rating: (6.5/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (4/10)

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Reviewer: Jorgy444 (Edit) Rating: Aug 28, 2012
Short stories probably most difficult
to be critiqued, because the author is
always leaving the reader wanting more,
and this author did an excellent job of
that! Nicely written, and a big thanks! (8/10)

Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Mar 11, 2012
I agree with both the Major and tedrange, because, hey!, the story is indeed short.
But there's much more here than meets the eye.
I found "Morning Call" to be an almost perfect essai where slavegirl1 succeeds in painting a clear picture in a short scene -which is no small feat all in itself and would be screwed-up by less capable writers.
Usually, I don't review such short epistels, but this one has enough quality to go for a fat niner. And upping the score to more or less compensate for the below par rating of my predecessors.
I think I should stroll over to "Brittany" and see what else slavegirl1 had up her sleeve. if it's anything as good as this here short, It'll be a damn fine story...
Hope to read more from slavegirl1.
JJ (10/10)

Reviewer: Major Littmann (Edit) Rating: Mar 10, 2012
Ok but there is too little of it (4/10)

Reviewer: tedrange (Edit) Rating: Mar 10, 2012
Short and not much there. (4/10)

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