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Becoming a Model
Author: Semiater
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(Added on Oct 21, 2011)
(This month 106908 readers) (Total 140871 readers) |
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A spoiled, beautiful, young girl who needs to pay for her spring break and decides to become a model, along the way she discovers a world she’s not familiar with, and, things about herself she couldn’t imagine. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 16, 2011 |
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Not a bad start, but the different people moving about in "Becoming a Model" are in need of some characterization and semiater needs a synonym dictionary to find replacements for "huge", "throbbing" and other overused words...
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Spankd
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Dec 2, 2011 |
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Really enjoyed this, left me moist and wanting
more
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| Reviewer:
yishabeia
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Nov 2, 2011 |
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So far so good. Hope next charpter will be better. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Nov 1, 2011 |
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I realize this qualifies as 'damning with faint praise', but this turned out to be a better story than I expected… or than it started out. The second half of chapter one was worth the introduction, and id the next installment is as good, I'll raise your rating. (8/10)
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jkim
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Oct 31, 2011 |
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You always write a good tale, a one or two cummer for sure! The transition to the site seems to have messed with the quotation marks, for some reason. Well, you've got the girl where you want her, so looking forward to the next part! Steph says Hi! (8/10)
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