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Sandra Ottershaw Ponygirl 314
Author: A.Broadsword
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(Added on Oct 16, 2011)
(This month 65955 readers) (Total 84816 readers) |
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On a small idyllic Cornish island Sandra or Ponygirl 314 waits patiently for the speedboat to arrive not knowing her life is to be changed for ever |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Jorgy444
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Mar 29, 2012 |
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These are short stories, so I believe very well
written, great interaction with humor between
main characters. Keeps waiting for more, very
imaginative, proofreading would be a great
enhancer and show polish for the author!
Thanks for the story! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
a.broadsword
(Edit) (Mar 29, 2012)
- Thank you the poor initial feednback led me to shelve part 2 so I may dust it off again now if people like it, Actually at the time I thought it was the best I had ever written.
Thanks again for taking the time and trouble to review it.
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 24, 2011 |
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Couldn't find any mishaps in "Sandra Ottershaw Ponygirl 314" -a title which seems to suggest (judging by later stories) that A.Broadsword wants to go mathematical on his readers.
On the contrary, I highly enjoyed the tale, so far. Simply because it's very well written, has some good to excellent descriptions, a touch of well placed humor and some great dialogue/conversations.
One of A.Broadsword's best stories, literary speaking, because of the naturel of the characters and fluency in the writing.
Well done.
JJ (10/10)
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HuManiMal
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Oct 30, 2011 |
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Some parts brilliant, other parts seem incomplete. Little detail what a "pony girl", important for those who don't know. Sandra is a well made character, rest, especially Jen, don't seem real to me. If author goes over it a couple of times I think it can be a really good story. (6/10)
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