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Fantasy Football
Author: Ted.
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(Added on Oct 9, 2011)
(This month 58694 readers) (Total 63764 readers) |
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A rich friend pays me to humiliate myself under his feet, with unexpected consequences. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
npatek
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May 27, 2012 |
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Thank you for your fine story. I like the submission, which starts as a play, a joke. I like the teasing with the money. During reading I hoped it would lead to a position of a servant at beck and call - and it did.
The story tells of true submissiveness. More rich people should request such services.
I would like to read more about how he lived as a slave. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nrjb2
(Edit) (May 27, 2012)
- Thank you for the review, I appreciate it. "More rich people should request such services" -- if so I think a good thing would be that our unemployment rate would be lower lol.
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| Reviewer:
puperik
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Oct 21, 2011 |
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great story I like the way it progresses (9/10)
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- Replied by:
nrjb2
(Edit) (Nov 11, 2011)
- Thank you very much. I appreciate the review.
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