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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
pmpo80
(Edit) |
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Nov 9, 2011 |
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Very good. I hope author will write more stories ) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
DON609
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May 23, 2011 |
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I like it, I would read more. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
rocket71
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May 18, 2011 |
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I liked it. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
iceblock
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May 15, 2011 |
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Well that was quick. Was Barbie restrained by some sort of time limit to write her story? (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
crazymathman
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May 12, 2011 |
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Grammar and spelling were good, and the first person perspective works well with this type of story. the plot was a little choppy however, like the story was written in a rush, with no real seperations between the flash backs and the present. there was also a serious lack of descriptive text, extending the story with merely more description would drastically improve it. It seemed to jump from one point to another a bit too much, making it hard to follow. (6/10)
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