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In My Own Words
Author: Janet.Baker
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(Added on Apr 27, 2011)
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Janet was kidnapped from her home and brutalized unmercifully. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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May 8, 2011 |
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I tend to agree with Sir Stef this is the dialogue for the Video. It's just that the description of Janet being brutalized unmercifully is completely missing and that is what should be on the page here. I'm not entirely sure she was brutalized as she seems to have enjoyed the whole thing immensely. It's not easy for a man to write in female first person "janet" so why bother? (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
SirStef
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May 4, 2011 |
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where can I get the vids? - lol (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jack_Bonder
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May 1, 2011 |
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Quite a good story in my opinion. I liked the writing style, a bit 'interactive', which follows the title "In my own words". Here and there the story was a bit confusing though, things seemed to contradict themselves.
But all in all enjoyed the story, nice and twisted ;) (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Apr 30, 2011 |
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I just don't know what to say in this review. The story is so ordinary and written in such a way that I found myself scrolling through to see if it improved. Maybe this attempt is an experiment. If so, it fails. The only reason I rate it as high as a 4 is that the grammar wasn't horrible. I wish I could offer something constructive but I can't - I just don't know what to offer. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
SirStef
(Edit) (May 4, 2011)
- where can I get the vids? -lol
- Replied by:
Major Littmann
(Edit) (May 8, 2011)
- You shouldn't need a video SirStef, it should all be here on the page, that's the point of erotic literature.
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