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The Capture of an Immortal
Author: Vlad Potemkin
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(Added on Apr 27, 2002)
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In the battle of immortals, one sadistic male immortal breaks the rules and captures a beauty for slow sexual torment. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Pooka
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Aug 12, 2002 |
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Very well written and nicely paced for maximum enjoyment -- what a tease! It's nice to come across a story that has more than the 'beat the stupid slut into submission' theme. Strong characters with a wicked sense of kink are refreshing. Do I sense a battle of wills between Natasha and Andre? Two dominant types vying with each other for ultimate control of the situation? How HOT! :)
I am looking forward to the next chapter!
(9/10)
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hyphen666
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Apr 28, 2002 |
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This one has some potential. I hope Duncan doesn't get in the way of the fun and games that the villain (hiss) has planned for his victim. Let's hope that the author can come up with something that smacks of originality when it comes to tormenting the heroine; he's certainly had enough time to plan it. (7/10)
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