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A Decadent Wager
Author: antiphas
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(Added on Apr 8, 2011)
(This month 112548 readers) (Total 130328 readers) |
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High school girl accepts challenge from her rival only to be subjected to sadistic control and humiliation. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Genevieve1986
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May 7, 2011 |
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I love this but it feels "the end" is the beginning of the really good part. Any chance to see what will happen at school? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
antiphas
(Edit) (May 7, 2011)
- Thank you kindly. Had thought that the second part was risking dragging it out too long, so I ended it there. There might be some more "education" in store :)
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| Reviewer:
subalo
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Apr 14, 2011 |
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This is a very good start (first chapter done at the time of this review). Great start, believable plot and awesome basic content. Can't wait for more chapters. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
antiphas
(Edit) (Apr 15, 2011)
- Thank you very much for your kind words.
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| Reviewer:
worthlessfem
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Apr 13, 2011 |
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This is an outstanding piece of writing. I can't fault it to be honest. My only regret is that I want to know what happens next. Please let us have at least a part two and preferably further adventures of the girls. An excellent example of lesbian domination. 10 out of 10! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
antiphas
(Edit) (Apr 15, 2011)
- very kind review. Not sure I deserved that high of praise, but much appreciated
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| Reviewer:
Mr. Willit
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Apr 12, 2011 |
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Good start. Don't let this die. Lots of things you could do for the weekend: girls bring their boyfriends over, forced exercise, forced stretching, forcing her to talk incredibly dirty, massive enemas and being forced to swallow it, a full day of orgasm denial... so many options, don't waste it. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
antiphas
(Edit) (Apr 12, 2011)
- Thank you for your kind words. I will keep all this in mind when writing the next chapter.
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 11, 2011 |
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Well written with good descriptive text as to the action/torture. i feel however it could do with more characterization and definately more of either one of the girls feelings - either the jubilation and feeling of power or the anguish/pain and determination not to give in.
All in all a good read, thank you antiphas. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
antiphas
(Edit) (Apr 12, 2011)
- Thank you for your thoughts. I will work on the characterization some more :)
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| Reviewer:
FootSlaveE
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Apr 9, 2011 |
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Great start. I can't wait to read more! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
antiphas
(Edit) (Apr 12, 2011)
- Thank you very much. I am working on the follow up, should be up soon. Appreciate you taking time to read it.
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