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The Heiress
Author: R.B. Thibo
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(Added on Apr 24, 2002)
(This month 135513 readers) (Total 166596 readers) |
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At a fundraiser Barbara Browning, daughter of a wealthy computer company owner acts snobbishly towards a man who asked her to dance with him. She soon learns that it does not pay to be so rude to other people. Especially to a corporate raider named Frank Tisdale. |
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 18, 2003 |
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This is a well told and rather long story that touches on several aspects of bdsm. The story line is very exciting and the writing is generally excellent, but there is a great deal of repetition, both in terms of the action sequences and descriptions (I could have screamed if the villain of the piece was described as the "trollish man" one more time). The "sound effects" were also constant irritants throughout the story. I think the length could have been cut by about one third without losing much. A very good piece of work and an enjoyable read, all the same. (8/10)
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hyphen666
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Apr 25, 2002 |
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A quick review to see if this epic is worth reading; yes it is! A cursory sampling of this lengthy effort indicates a very fixated author with a talent for "fantastic" sadism. The use of the villain's 8 year old daughter as a coconspirator is an excellent touch, but why oh why must every villain have a huge sex organ? Sex, scat and extreme torture is an interesting combination that works very well for this reviewer.The ending was good, nasty and ugly, like the story.
I had major problems with the ability of the victim to absorb incredible amounts of human waste without rupturing any of her internal organs; I'll chalk that up to author's license. However I cannot justify the miserable or perhaps non-existent job of proof-reading that this story received. (8/10)
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