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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
coyote3k
(Edit) |
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Aug 24, 2012 |
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Great torture and humiliation. The only drawback is that it ends to soon, please continue. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Michael247
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Feb 16, 2011 |
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ROFL. I'm sorry... I'm still laughing...
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LOL... Okay... (chuckle) let's discuss this story. First of all, underage children aren't really my idea of an erotic time. Sort of like contemplating an underripe banana. Yes, it may be the right shape, but it's just not quite ready yet. That said, I understand that its not really the AGE that some people are attracted too, but the innocence and meekness that is usually associated with that age. While I personally didn't find the brutal rape of a thirteen year old appealing, it didn't affect my rating.
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For the most part the story is written in first person and then when the babysitter arrives, moves to third person omniscient. This seemed a bit odd and I would recommend to the author to keep it all in one form or the other. Oddly enough, I liked the first person narrative better. It felt more real and took a better approach to pacing as we moved through the plot. I could visualize that bastard doing those things to his step-daughter, and following up each revelation with "well my wife is even more mean!" This was a stroke of genius. It's like some sort of sick justification where both actors just don't really get that what they're doing is wrong!
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Lastly, why am I laughing? Simple: "Lisa took an enormous vibrator out of her purse, it was bigger than her arm, and needed fourteen D batteries to function." Fourteen D size batteries? My GOD! LOL! Aren't you laughing?
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Yours Faithfully,
Michael Alexander
(www.michaelalexanderstories.com) (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Feb 10, 2011 |
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I guess if you are into torturing a 13 year old girl and having her sodomised by stray dogs then this is a 10 Me I found it about as erotic as a wiring diagram for a fan heater. Still the spelling is ok and its nicely formatted, so maybe a 5 (4/10)
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b_rad20000
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Feb 1, 2011 |
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Excellent story, I love the details and the creativeness involved. Please do continue! (9/10)
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