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Dubai Vacation with a Twist
Author: didmaker
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(Added on Apr 22, 2010)
(This month 62686 readers) (Total 77654 readers) |
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Three women on vacation in Dubai have more local color added to their trip then they bargained for. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
kitbogha
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Jun 8, 2011 |
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I thought this was a great, very sexy story. I'm a little surprised it has had such low scores so far. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Apr 25, 2010 |
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There's a set of rules regarding the reviewing of stories, and that is to stick to what it says next to the scores... In my case, I have to grab at least for a seven, as it says "Good, was worth reading" next to it.
Next to three, it says "Mediocre, with barely acceptable grammar", which certainly is not the case with "Dubai Vacation With a Twist"...
Okay, so there are a few spots where the syntax, grammar and other technicalities go down the drain, but that doesn't change one iota about what has been written. And what's been written is good. Point.
Adding two points to counterbalance an unfair score.
JJ (9/10)
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NistShadow
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Apr 24, 2010 |
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There are a set of rules for writing which make it very clear to the reader what the writer is intending. Its little things like using a full stop '.' to indicate the end of a sentance or speach marks '" Hello Mate."' to show when someone is talking. I suggest learning how to use the system in place and not just making up your own system. (3/10)
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