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Second Chance
Author: thetrudruid
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(Added on Mar 30, 2010)
(This month 48480 readers) (Total 54392 readers) |
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Sub and Dom relearn their relationship after a 3 year hiatus. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Feb 21, 2011 |
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Enjoyable tale. POV shift wasn't all that disorienting. Well written, pretty well edited. Just a few thousand words short! Write on! (8/10)
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Dryhill
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Apr 2, 2010 |
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Predictable but good little story. i would have given it a little higher score but for the change between "I" and "she", is this a first person story or not?
Anyway enough bad comment. This was not a bad story for a first attempt, keep on writing. (5/10)
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