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The butcher’s meat sales
Author: Rotneb
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(Added on Mar 21, 2010)
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Camilla were drawn into the weekly States Meat Lottery and had to follows the rules for human pigs. |
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| Reviewer:
bleckerde
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Mar 21, 2011 |
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A very interesting story from the Dolcett universe (8/10)
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Spitman
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Feb 8, 2011 |
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I'm also a fan of Dolcett, also a writer of Dolcett stories, and this one was original enough to justify a good rating, although I agree with most of the comments on the difficult language! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nemz
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Apr 8, 2010 |
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From what I can tell, the story seems decent and interesting. I'm personally a fan of Dolcett and enjoy reading works based off his stories. However, after the first section, I couldn't read any longer. The grammar and formatting was giving me a headache. As such, there's two suggestions I'd like to give the author. Either start writing in your own language or find an editor on the forums who is willing to go through and fix your story.
I would love to read the story once it's fixed up. As for now though, I'll have to pass. (4/10)
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sbrooks103
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Mar 22, 2010 |
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I can't really rate the content due to the difficulty with the grammar. I assume the author is non-native English speaker and would benefit by having a fluent English editor. (3/10)
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Major Littmann
(Edit) (Mar 25, 2010)
- Give the guy a break, he has come a very long way from his early stories and the strange stilted conversation goes a long way to making this a fantasy not a real horror story, I still think it's a 10 for originality.
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Mar 21, 2010 |
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It's either a 2 or a 10+ depending if you like the subject or not but I'll give the guy a break and give it a 10, just keep a bucket handy if you have a weak stomach! (10/10)
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