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Cuckold\'s Lament
Author: DionysusMas
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(Added on Feb 20, 2010)
(This month 23374 readers) (Total 34900 readers) |
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A man finds that playing around on the internet can lead to more real life drama than he would like as his wife and online master team up to humiliate and enslave him. |
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Feb 25, 2010 |
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I do not know if this is your first posting but it was pretty good. Unlike alot of things I read you had a beginnning, middle and end. Not only that, you have a plot, it was one that in this day and age could be believeable. You seemed to rush things just a smidge but nothing major. You also explained your characters. They did not just show up out of thin air and suddenly have this major role in your story. I also liked the fact that you knew how to talk about sex and sexual activities without sounding like a cheap porn. By this I mean, you knew which words to use, where and how often.
I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future. (7/10)
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