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Debbie
Author: Excalibur
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(Added on Feb 19, 2010)
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There was something about Debbie that I couldnt see, but something definite. I had to know what it was |
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| Reviewer:
ilikebdsm
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Feb 27, 2010 |
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Really liked the story. The curiosity, the drive to find why and the surprise at the end.
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| Reviewer:
Jake Olive
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Feb 26, 2010 |
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Outstanding story telling. Great mystery build up and a great ending. Good Work. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Feb 24, 2010 |
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Finally!
I have read several of your stories and, as I recall, reviewed one or two. I tend to avoid your tales because they seem incomplete - more like good ideas you are in a hurry to finish. This, on the other hand, is the first truly complete story of yours I have read and I must add my positive comments to your previous reviews.
I admit this story is rather tame for my tastes. Just the same, it was excellently conceived and executed and, far from being run-of-the-mill porn.
To close; the ending was perfect; believable and promising. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
SissyDanni
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Feb 24, 2010 |
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Loved the story. It flowed well and kept me interested. I loved the characters. A very enjoyable read. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Excalibur_1949
(Edit) (Feb 24, 2010)
- Thank you
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| Reviewer:
texanpauline
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Feb 24, 2010 |
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Great story, well written. Original, well paced, well structured, credible enough, immersive. I loved it. One spelling error is the worst I can say about it. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Excalibur_1949
(Edit) (Feb 24, 2010)
- Thank you for the wonderful review. Am pleased you enjoyed it
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