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Suzie Author: Excalibur
(Added on Jan 2, 2010) (This month 15220 readers) (Total 28318 readers)
a night at a party leads Suzie into a new life of debauchery and slavery

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Weighed Average (?): (7/10)
Average Rating: (8/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (6/10)

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Reviewer: littleone_ (Edit) Rating: Jan 26, 2010
And Excalibur hits another home run. (10/10)

Reviewer: Venom (Edit) Rating: Jan 9, 2010
This story has a nice start with its rather accurate description of Suzie's first hours in slavery. But then? "For the next two days", "Over the next three weeks"...
There is nothing wrong with leaps in time during a narration, but the author rushes through the days and weeks, without even pointing out Suzie's actual breaking.
"When her door opened, she did what was required of her,..." and "The lesbian had gone, and in her place was a subservient and obedient slut." is all the reader gets.
Furthermore, the story doesn't derive advantage from the drug idea, although here lies big potential.
On the other hand, no one can say that this is just a bad story. With an editing, it is in for a 7. (6/10)

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