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College Submission
Author: Da'Rookie22
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(Added on Feb 1, 2002)
(This month 81448 readers) (Total 154156 readers) |
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Jackie had been eagerly awaiting this weekend for awhile now. With the college community heading home (or to Florida) for Spring Break, she decided to use this new-found privacy to engage in a thorough self-bondage session... that is, until her best-friend/roommate catches her... |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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Martiniman
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Dec 11, 2011 |
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This was an excellent story full of everything you need for an erotic tale. A must read! (10/10)
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Heritor
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Aug 2, 2011 |
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*like
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Dryhill
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Feb 28, 2010 |
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Have read this story three times now and still enjoy it. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 18, 2009 |
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A tad heavy in the detail department at times, but overall a very enjoyable tale.
JJ (8/10)
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lifeofaswitch
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Jan 16, 2007 |
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This is one of my favourite stories out there. I have read it many times, but only just got round to reviewing it (I know, I know, I'm sorry).
The pacing is great, literacy well done and the overall story is one which I really enjoyed. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 15, 2006 |
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one of the few stories i have read where the self bondage themem was use and was good (9/10)
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Luke Skywalker
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Dec 7, 2005 |
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Very naughty story. Very descriptive of the female teasing. Wonderful adaptation of finding the diary. Loved the repeated turmoil of having the opportunity to escape but choosing to submit. (9/10)
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TarlCabot
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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Nicely done. The pacing was very nice and the use of imagery was appropriate. (9/10)
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bdsmbill
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Feb 11, 2004 |
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This was an excellent story, and I would have given it a higher rating except that smoking is an instant turn-off for me. I did get a laugh when you said how sweet her mouth tasted when they kissed. (8/10)
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Feb 2, 2004 |
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Slow start, but it speeds up well enough. The continuing detail to comfort and feelings of the slave is an enjoyment to read. Excellent dialog, with Kristen semi-feeling out the bottom, but in a dominant sort of way.
Hopefully you'll write more, be it this series, or something else? (10/10)
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Nov 24, 2003 |
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OMG that was amazing! Please tell me you plan to write more? Please? This story just plain kicked ass! (10/10)
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jbowler65
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Sep 6, 2003 |
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Very good story that makes me want to go back to college. (9/10)
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don11
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Jun 16, 2003 |
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Immensely enjoysble.
Nice ending ... and a happy ending.
Only one worry - is this it or do you have more to come. (10/10)
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May 9, 2003 |
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Very well written, thanks (10/10)
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Dec 8, 2002 |
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Well written, soft but nice to read story. (9/10)
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easyrolf
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Nov 2, 2002 |
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i think ponytaras review matched exactly what i think about the story. (9/10)
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Sep 13, 2002 |
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Well written and believable, this is an instant classic. I would love to see another set of chapters. (10/10)
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Koolbreeze
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Jun 26, 2002 |
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Excellent story, extremely well written and pushes all my buttons. Those of you familiar with the "Terry and Jennifer" stories will be very pleased. (10/10)
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ponytara
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Jun 10, 2002 |
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I think probably the most enjoyable thing about this story is that it's really quite well written. It's discriptive enough that you're not left wondering, and subtle so that your imagination can have fun.
Normally I'd go for more harder stuff than this, but I really enjoyed this story. (9/10)
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StrictCritic
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Feb 7, 2002 |
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This story is HOT! I was about to close it after a little bit of a slow start, and was SOOOOO glad I didn't. Its got some hot F/f action, some awesome BDSM aspects, but it doesn't go too far. Well thought out and planned. I recommend this story to everyone! (10/10)
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110400
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Feb 6, 2002 |
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Well written story with some very hot f/f action that skillfully builds to a climax in Part II. Excellent. (9/10)
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easyman
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Feb 3, 2002 |
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good story.slow in the beginning but worthwhile in the end.can not wait for part 2 (8/10)
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