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The Company Picnic
Author: Azalel
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(Added on Mar 25, 2009)
(This month 66003 readers) (Total 85800 readers) |
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The MacMillans are recruited to provide entertainment at the company picnic |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
pingjockey
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Dec 27, 2014 |
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An absolutely wonderful story. Well constructed and perfectly presented in it's universe giving the reader a dynamic credible experience (10/10)
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Omega22
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Jan 1, 2010 |
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I am pleased by this story, because it in detail describes all process and unlike other snuff stories girls stay alive until end and not much text is wasted on preamble. as Bonus you also managed to match my taste for self torture. But that part was a bit too short so I give rating of 9. (9/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Mar 28, 2009 |
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The plot of the story is not all that bad. I am not a fan of snuff stories but the title did catch my eye. (6/10)
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DirtyOldPervert
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Mar 27, 2009 |
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This was actually a very well written and erotic Snuff story -- a cut above most of the snuff stories on this site. Hopefully, you will be able to add a "snuff" code to this story or ask the site administrator to do it. That may resolve the complaints of some of the other reviewers. (8/10)
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kimmi
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Mar 26, 2009 |
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These cannibalism stories are just plain silly. Oh yes, I guess it is alright if you eat me...as long as you enjoy it (2/10)
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Major Littmann
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Mar 26, 2009 |
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Its a nasty Snuff Tale, multiple horrific deaths, people roasted alive and the major problem is the codes and synopsis give no warning of the horrific nature of the Tale.|From the codes I expected mild humilliation, maybe some extreme torture, but it made me feel quite ill. If you like to believe women have no feelings and enjoy being roasted over a fire and then happily die then you will wonder why I did not rate it 10.
If you read the codes you may wonder why I gave it more than 2. If its Snuff, call it Snuff. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Azalel
(Edit) (Mar 26, 2009)
- Sorry about the missing "Snuff" code. I was sure I had included it and was surprised when I saw my story did not have it. As for the rest, I guess the "Extreme" and "Violent" codes just did not tip you off that people were going to get hurt.
Also, If it made you sick, why did you continue reading it?
I do not find your review helpful. Other than the content, which I concede was a bit rough, how was the flow of the story? Was it easy to follow? Did it make sense or did you have to think "Oh! That's what the author is trying to say,"?
I can appreciate that the content was not to your liking, but I feel you give a false representation of my story. Do people die? Yes. Hence, the apology for the missing "Snuff" code.
Thank you for reviewing the story. I only hope that, in the future, you will use more constructive criticism. Oh, and I hope you re-read the "Do's and Don'ts" of reviewing. I am pretty sure that spoilers are frowned upon.
Thanks
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