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Being Master\'s slave
Author: jenni
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(Added on Feb 28, 2009)
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poem describing what it\'s like to be his slave |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Mar 6, 2009 |
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Technically, the poem reads all wrong, because the rhythm isn't right.
Content-wise, this is excellent material, describing in a sweet and accurate way the synergy between the Master and the slave.
English teachers will cringe at the format, but JimmyJumps all over the world will do the latter part in their name honour.
Like it says besides the "9" rating: "Very enjoyable and well written".
JJ (9/10)
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