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Mella\'s Obsession Author: Molly Dunleavy
(Added on Jan 24, 2009) (This month 53032 readers) (Total 65100 readers)
Mella must submit to Master Ben for punishment after committing multiple sins during her day.

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Feb 2, 2009
Well written, but the story feels too much like a dry account of events. It's nice to have some icing on a cake, but when there's so much icing you can't see what's underneath, you get a tad apprehensive to eat the cake.
Here, what's been written so far, is the icing on a cake, but sadly, the cake is missing.
Story would have been far-out if we would be able to get a more intimate glimpse inside of Mella's head, instead of getting the facts of what's being done to her.
Molly Dunleavy shows promise as a writer, all we have to do is urge her to read a couple of psychology books.
JJ (8/10)

Reviewer: Tleanne5664 (Edit) Rating: Jan 28, 2009
Please finish it! (10/10)

Reviewer: skp2bear (Edit) Rating: Jan 25, 2009
much more please. (10/10)

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