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How to marry a rich woman
Author: slaveboyusa
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(Added on Jan 14, 2009)
(This month 17433 readers) (Total 34614 readers) |
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Adam is a cable guy. He always wanted more out of life, but he never got a lucky break. One of his clients is a snobby bitch. Is this opportunity knocking? This story is not related to the movie \"Cable Guy\". |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
nqtv
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Nov 29, 2011 |
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I really enjoyed this, keep up the good work! (8/10)
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MycroftXXXX
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Mar 21, 2009 |
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First let me say thank you so much for taking the time to write and keep updating this story. I like a lot of the concepts explored here, and I think the concept of the crass blue collar type defiling the classy and skilled woman touches on a very primal nerve.
That said I think the writing really needs to be stepped up a little for this story to shine. The sentences are very short and choppy. This is annoying. They tend to state everything. Even the obvious. This kills mood. Next to the 5 it says "Ok, but has some promise, the author could improve it". I agree that this story has promise, but could very much be improved. That said, next to the six it says "Somewhat enjoyable, acceptable writing skills" which also fits this story. I tend to give the benefit of the doubt, and I think with some work on the writing this could shoot up on my rankings. Good luck! (6/10)
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dennisthmn
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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You do more to the training part of the tale (6/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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I'm going the opposite way of go0phi and mkemske here. I found the story to be lacking in originality.
I know this is supposed to be a site where most stories are based on figments of our imagination, but raping and subduing a woman during working hours, just because she's snooty, says a lot about the lack of inventiveness of the writer. Sorry.
JJ (5/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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nice story great theme (8/10)
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go0phi
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Jan 16, 2009 |
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Nice story. Good narrative flow and imaginative setting. I look forward to reading more... (7/10)
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