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Submission Author: Gabby
(Added on Jan 4, 2009) (This month 62818 readers) (Total 81384 readers)
Recently divorced, and newly unemployed, Gabby finds herself living with her younger sister, Brenda. After a few weeks of frustration, Brenda starts to require Gabby's cooperation around the house...

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Weighed Average (?): (9/10)
Average Rating: (9.5/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (8/10)

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Reviewer: Dryhill (Edit) Rating: Apr 2, 2010
A nice slow start and good charater development. i hope there are more chapters on the way. (9/10)

Reviewer: austerud (Edit) Rating: Mar 5, 2009
Superb story so far. I'm looking forward to more. Thanks (10/10)

Reviewer: msilsby (Edit) Rating: Feb 17, 2009
Can't wait for further chapters. Please! (10/10)

Reviewer: rocket71 (Edit) Rating: Jan 9, 2009
This could be an outstanding story!I hope the author can dig out more. (10/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jan 6, 2009
very well done (8/10)

Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Jan 4, 2009
The start and ending of a story are always the hardest parts, so, it's no surprise that the first few paragraphs seem a tad awkward.
Funny enough, as the mood is set very accurately in later paragraphs, the awkwardness of the first few dissolves when going over them again.
That the awkwardness dissolves pretty fast, is mainly thanks to the use of excellent dialogues between the sisters. Without going into too many details, an understandable background is painted.
As a conclusion, this looks to become a very interesting tale.
The stage is set, the lights go down... now we wait for the band to start playing.
Excellent start.
JJ (9/10)

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