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A Public Spectacle
Author: Neal Chisholm aka oldpervert1
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(Added on Nov 23, 2008)
(This month 180332 readers) (Total 238895 readers) |
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A short romance novel with a twisted bdsm & sci-fi plot. It should be equally offensive to romance novel enthusiasts, porno connoisseurs and sci-fi weirdos. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
lbfm
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Oct 13, 2010 |
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I liked the setting and the various sex acts in this one. Overal a pretty good story. I would just like to advice the author to get rid of the underlining of the text. (8/10)
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Chuckdom19
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Mar 6, 2009 |
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The story is improving as it continues, with, as promised, something to offend everyone. It is a GOOD story, however; an interesting universe and a finely-cohesive one. I hope there is much more! (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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Although I can be pinned under either category you mentioned, I don't feel offended. On the contrary, I am slightly overjoyed...
Okay, so there's some minor flaws, but hey, everybody can find flaws when they are looking for some.
Great, well-written story.
JJ (9/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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short but good (8/10)
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yazdt
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Dec 11, 2008 |
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I very much liked the technical details. (8/10)
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a.broadsword
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Dec 8, 2008 |
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If you hoped to upset everyone then you failed miserably I think the addition of the second girl detracts from the flow of the story and it seems more future earth than Sci Fi but that is an interesting world you have created and I want to read more about it. (9/10)
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kinkcrazy
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Dec 5, 2008 |
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poorly written (4/10)
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Pearlgem
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Nov 29, 2008 |
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There are a lot of erotic details to enjoy in this story but if Y is humiliated about her predicament, she doesn't show it much. Kinda disappointing. Also, the exposition at the beginning I find unrealistic - Y and her lawyer would not speak this way as they already know these facts. The addition of Candy I find a distraction in someone else's story - not unless you made the public display block the real star and told 'its' various stories.
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ultimatesubbie
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Nov 28, 2008 |
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Good start but the underlining makes it difficult to read. Need to remove it!
(7/10)
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