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Executive Stress
Author: Tim Miller
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(Added on Oct 28, 2008)
(This month 54758 readers) (Total 64778 readers) |
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A woman executive finds a unique exercise camp that will relieve her stress.I am looking for mature women's comments on the story. The story is slow and designed for a woman audience. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Stephen Miletus
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Jan 15, 2012 |
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I agree with JimmyJump about this story. It obviously falls into the "individual finds relief by being a sex slave" type of BDSM story, yet fails to provide any details that would make this effort work. In fact, the manner Jane Johnson is handled would put off any woman, & likely send all but the those lacking any self-confidence to filing a criminal complaint about this institution. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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very nicely done (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 17, 2009 |
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Vikjon may find this to be "weri good", but it says more about Vik than about the story, because the latter is mediocre at best.
There's no real character development, no reason at all why Marge would send Jane to this PG resort, not even a reason why Jane would need some stress-relief...
On top of that, the author seems to be in a hurry to get things over with, with the outcome that everything rattles like a rusty medieval harness.
There's room for improvement, by simply filling-in the blanks and change this written-down idea into a real story.
Oh, and I'm sorry for not fitting the profile and not being a mature woman...
JJ (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
vikjon
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Oct 31, 2008 |
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weri good (10/10)
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