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Sharon's night
Author: Excalibur
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(Added on Aug 13, 2008)
(This month 52996 readers) (Total 66642 readers) |
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Sharon had made all the plans for her night of self bondage, nothing could go wrong. Could it? |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 11, 2010 |
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This is one from the Murphy's Law pages. Speaking of bad luck to have your apartment burglarized the night you string yourself up.
I also have my doubts about Excalibur's firm beliefs in the Postal Services. The latter doing all kinds of stuff, except delivering mail on time.
I was also wondering how Sharon was going to answer her door when the postman rings her bell to deliver the key. Seems to me there's a few holes in her plan. Or in Excalibur's.
Writing was good. Too bad about the flaws.
JJ (7/10)
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sayuna
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Sep 2, 2008 |
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nice - always a fan of the f-self stories. As has already been said, a few typos here and there, but well done. (8/10)
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sarahbunnyuk
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Sep 2, 2008 |
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I really liked this story, very erotic, from the point of view of a woman who enjoys being helpless for sex.. I liked the twist of the burglar, and also that he didn't try to hurt her, rather just enjoy himself at her expense. This, I have just discovered, is now a fantasy of mine!
My only point of note aside from the compliments and thanks, is that there is one or two simple typo errors in the script, but that can easily be redressed.
I look forward to more erotic ideas from this imaginative person, complete with my own assistant, mains adaptor attached!
This is also going onto my personal shelf..
(10/10)
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JonMaddux
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Aug 17, 2008 |
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Very enjoyable read! (9/10)
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lockedup737
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Aug 16, 2008 |
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This is a great story. I enjoy the helplessness of her.It kind of makes me want to get in line to fuck her. Maybe this could put a new idea in her head? She might enjoy being all tied up and getting caught? (9/10)
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texancharm{E.C.Holland}
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Aug 15, 2008 |
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*breathless pant* whew! What a good story! I am begging my Master to cum...i couldnt help but play with myself as i read it. The writing style was good, with only one spelling error i saw: ''flashy'' should be ''fleshy''. The best part was the anal: yummy! (8/10)
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sirbor
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Aug 15, 2008 |
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A very enjoyable tale. It would be interesting to find out how Sharon felt about her self-bondage adventures after she freed herself. Will she attempt it again? Will she meet her burgler again? Hopefully you will continue this plot-line. (9/10)
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Chuckdom19
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Aug 15, 2008 |
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A finely crafted story, with chances for expansion and a few repairs. Good suspense, though I'd like a bit more insight into the robber's mind. (9/10)
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