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New Society
Author: Mercury
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(Added on Aug 7, 2008)
(This month 68836 readers) (Total 78878 readers) |
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Some time in the future all 18 year old males are stripped naked, enslave, and sold to dominent women |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Nov 23, 2010 |
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An enjoyable little fantasy but rather lacking any characterization. As a number of reviewers have stated the story is rather short. Here is hoping for more in the near future. (6/10)
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topsfrombottom
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Aug 24, 2008 |
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Ok - MORE, please!!!
Gah! - THAT was like, well... like being led up to a fully-loaded banquet table, then handed a slice of buttered bread and then led away! Grrr! lol. VERY well-written and very engaging. An excellent launch.
Again - MORE! MORE! And SOON, please?!
tfb.. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Falcon
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Aug 22, 2008 |
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Thank you for an exciting story premise. What you have written is quite good, but you need to develop the theme much more. Keep it coming!!! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mr. Pete
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Aug 11, 2008 |
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Nice idea and what's there is good, but it's much too short. Why not develop the possibilities a bit? (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
freecroma10
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Aug 9, 2008 |
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There is a witty story beginning well. But I don’t understand why don’t you use quotation marks?
The question mark is used for the mark of the questions on the end of the sentence. The quotation mark signifies the dialogues.
Many readers have the prime language not English. Imagine please what will be from it, if the Chinese or the Japanese peoples will write in English according to the rules of their own language too. (8/10)
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