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Sara's Ultimate Surrender
Author: Petricia
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(Added on Jul 5, 2008)
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A young woman gives herself to a man from the net in what she considers to be the ultimate surrender. She experiences degradation beyond her wildest dreams. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Mar 16, 2010 |
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Not normally my type of story, but I must say I look forward to seeing what happens next to Sara. (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Dec 21, 2008 |
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A belated review for an excellent story, again. As I said before in other reviews, I prefer longer stories, but you, Petricia, have the knack of the true short story writer, in that you are able to add so much detail and characterizations in short, to the point bursts that weave themselves smoothly around a well thought-out storyline.
Thanks again for your excellent contributions.
JJ (10/10)
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Xander
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Jul 23, 2008 |
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A very erotic well-written short bestiality story. Character development excellent for such a short story. Pacing was also good. All in all, a very good read. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 12, 2008 |
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hope you add more soon (9/10)
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slavenaomi57
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Jul 7, 2008 |
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the first words that i read of your story really made me feel very horny and wet even though i wouldnt like to have gone through what your character went through it was still a great story to read i hope that you do another story very soon from slave naomi (9/10)
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mr_slogan
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Jul 7, 2008 |
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An excellany story. Well written and paced. (10/10)
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ukMasterC
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Jul 6, 2008 |
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Very well written. I look forward to reading the next episode (if there is one). (9/10)
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janmayen
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Jul 6, 2008 |
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Great story. Will there be a second part? (10/10)
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SlvTrayner
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Jul 6, 2008 |
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Very nice start, although the transition from being on the plane to being on the mounting platform was fairly quick! Let's hope this author finds it in herself to add a few more chapters detailing the heroine's further degradation and surrender to her new life. (9/10)
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