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    Sweet little Janie becomes a real Cow
    
    Author: A.Broadsword
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    (Added on Jul 3, 2008)
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    In a closed Midwest Community they have their own special way of bridging the gap from school to adult life, unless you ar a straight A student. | 
   
 
 
   
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    JimmyJump
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        Quite the fun story. Sexy too. And with some nice twists twisted in... JJ (9/10) 
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        love it, hope you finish it quickly. really enjoy reading it (9/10) 
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        this is an exceptional story. I totally enjoyed it. (10/10) 
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        This story is an exellent and insiduous piece of sci-fi. I read it a month ago, one of many and thought it was pretty good in terms of flow and impact. A month later, and the story's still lingering, particularly the bit about the biscuit. I've actually reccomended this website  on the basis of quality stories like this. A twisted mind Mr Broadsword. kudos.     (9/10) 
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a.broadsword
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        - Thanks for the kind words. I feel bad about the paragraphs and lack of capitals, but I guess I will have to engage the imagination again figure out what happened next, and submit part two.
 Thanks again A Broadsword. 
       
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        I was a bit confused about the role of women now in this world, so a little explanation in the beginning would have been nice.  Overall, the story was well developed and put together. (7/10) 
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        Very well written - look forward to the next episode. (9/10) 
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