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BRENDA STARR: OCEAN BOUND
Author: Bookmanwhb
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(Added on May 31, 2008)
(This month 52527 readers) (Total 63830 readers) |
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Brenda Starr reporter for Chicago Tribune sneaks on the sailboat and ends up in the clutches of a nast man who binds and uses her. Then sells her to a Chinese pimp. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (6/10) |
Average
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Highest
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Reviewer:
janmayen
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Jun 7, 2008 |
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I enjoy reading about girls being forced into prostitution. Good story. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
SteveL
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Jun 3, 2008 |
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I kinda enjoyed both stories and would enjoy more along the same lines! (with better grammar I would rate it an 8, at least.) The idea of using heroines from the comic area is right up my alley.. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
rolf palsy
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Jun 1, 2008 |
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This is somewhat better than the other story, but it still contains a steady stream of grammatical inaccuracies that really get in the way of trying to figure out if this story is worth reading further. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
bookmanwhb
(Edit) (Jun 2, 2008)
- I was some what shocked to find someone posted two of my stories on this site. They are works in progress so I am annoyed. Sorry you didn't like them I am going to see about getting them pulled. Bookmanwhb
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