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Awakening Angela
Author: Jake Cutler
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(Added on Dec 22, 2001)
(This month 66476 readers) (Total 95791 readers) |
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Young housewife Angela has a visitor at her door.....carrying a bag full of lovely things, all of which she will try with or without her consent. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (5.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (6/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 20, 2010 |
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Sorry i agree with ladys maid. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 1, 2004 |
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hope thers is more to come (6/10)
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Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 17, 2003 |
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The story is OK and has a well thought-out plot. However, the writing is not of the highest order with much repetition and some pretty poor grammar thrown in for good measure. All the same, it is a moderately enjoyable story that would benefit from a grammar review and a little more detail and characterization. (5/10)
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