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A Walk in the Hills
Author: debbie slut
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(Added on Apr 21, 2008)
(This month 83987 readers) (Total 122898 readers) |
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A relaxing day out turns into something very different. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Shibari
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Jul 18, 2008 |
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The story seemed to drag on without a great ending. Has potential. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Jun 21, 2008 |
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Good action, not over the top unbelievable. I was waiting for the big scene where Karen and Debbie get it on and was disappointed they never had real sex.
It would be nice if there was an epilogue where Debbie realizes that she wants to be dominated but doesn't want her life ruined by Karen, goes to the cops, gets the whole group in jail and lives happily ever after with another harsh mistress. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Boundtowrite
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May 19, 2008 |
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Has great potential for becoming an classic/ Well written, doesn't become (too) unrealistic, it might just happen to you!!
Really gets your mind-cinema started, some great scenes of humiliation, rubbing in the helplessness of the herione - then easing down a bit with her struggling mind (e.g. see the end of chapter four, yummy!!). Proofs that stories needn't be extreme, gross or bizarre to be exciting. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Apr 30, 2008 |
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A very well-written humiliation story! If it makes me wet, it must be good! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 24, 2008 |
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very nicely written a layed out (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lisa Jones
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Apr 22, 2008 |
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Great start to what promises to be a really hot story. More please. (9/10)
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