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Awake
Author: davesslave_9000
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(Added on Mar 8, 2008)
(This month 48182 readers) (Total 54195 readers) |
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This is a story of a womans trip down the lane of forced slavery/submission planned and emplemented by a chance encounter unknown to her. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
DeGrinch
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Mar 20, 2008 |
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You have a good start here and I'm assuming that you intend to develope the character later so I wont complain about that. The writing itself was easy to read. I look forward to more of the story. (7/10)
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