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Martha and Laura Author: Chained_Paladin
(Added on Feb 11, 2008) (This month 51639 readers) (Total 64390 readers)
A bitch and a beauty captured and broken; the one to recieve punishment for her selfish ways, the other to be rewarded as your cherished, grateful slave.

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Reviewer: H Dean (Edit) Rating: Feb 14, 2008
The story line was a farce, overly simplistic and not particularly well thought out. The technical skills displayed in this tale are lacking signifigantly, as well. On a positive note, I can see that the author was making an honest attempt at writing something with a little more substance than a standard sex tale
**Chained Paladin - come on into the Forums and join the Writers Block. I think you will improve dramatically with a little instruction. (4/10)

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