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Giving Alice What She Wants and Needs
Author: Brenda
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(Added on Dec 3, 2001)
(This month 16976 readers) (Total 45096 readers) |
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In time of war two sex-starved young wives make do as best as they can, one assuming the role of the husband and the other as her submissive wife. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 11, 2009 |
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This could have been an exquisite tale. Bar the fact that the intro was rushed and in fact not needed, there's also the convenient zapping of the dog.
Now you see it, now you don't, as the canine character suddenly appears at Lucy and Alice's side when going home from the woods, and it magically disappears again after having sniffed Alice's crotch and the women go up the stairs. Magic!
JJ (8/10)
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pantiwaste
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Aug 6, 2004 |
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This is a very hot piece (every pun intended. I was easily able to imagine myself as Alice and was straining against my panties for most of the piece in large part because the author's style pulls you into the action a stoke at a time. (9/10)
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wimple
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Nov 21, 2002 |
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another BEST from BRENDA,no more need be said of HER writting. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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Dec 11, 2001 |
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It's quite promising.
I'm looking forward to the next part (8/10)
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