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The Perfect Buns Restaurant
Author: Apollo
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(Added on Nov 7, 2007)
(This month 61347 readers) (Total 87663 readers) |
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An 18 year old girl is introduced by a friend to work in a restaurant. She finds the uniform quite embarrassing and uncomfortable, and the rules very strict, but the pay is good... |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Story is 'saved' thanks to the solid writing, because without it, this would be a tiresome stacking of not well though-out cliché's.
Pedestrian story with lots of shallow conversations and characterizations which don't go further than minds focused on 'kinky' sex.
But, like I said, the writing is good, so what am I complaining then...
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
floydy
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Nov 19, 2007 |
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like this a lot, looking forward to the next part (8/10)
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bracemaiden
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Nov 17, 2007 |
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Interesting start of a story. I liked the bits of detail, such as the sandals. As with the other reviewers, I also look forward to part 2. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
TzA
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Nov 16, 2007 |
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Excellent start, please continue your story (9/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 15, 2007 |
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great story, great job (9/10)
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clx01752
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Nov 15, 2007 |
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Excellent story , good beginning , great atmosphere and detail . PLEASE continue . (9/10)
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