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Baby Business Author: margot
(Added on Oct 24, 2007) (This month 58233 readers) (Total 75874 readers)
Girl is kidnapped to have babies which will be sold to adoption agencies.

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Average Rating: (5/10)
Highest Rating: (6/10)
Lowest Rating: (3/10)

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Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jan 9, 2009
you badly need grammerical work and proof reading,lack of both took the joy out of reading the story (6/10)

Reviewer: bmtphoenix (Edit) Rating: Nov 14, 2007
Decent, but do some proofreading before putting it up. (6/10)

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Nov 1, 2007
So many grammar and word choice errors that it hardly earns a rating, but please, the idea has possibilities. Perhaps a co-author or good editor could help.
A constant run of short sentences has its place, but when that is all you have, it makes the story sound like something out of a second grade primer. Complex sentences allow more choices of words, more modifiers, and, typically, a smoother flow to the writing. (3/10)

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