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| Reviewer:
chksng19
(Edit) |
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Sep 30, 2007 |
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I'm guessing English is not your first language. If that is the case, the story is good but hard to read, due to missing articles and noun/verb agreement, along with some other concerns.
You could find yourself an editor to help you along; this could help with story scores and reader count. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
wei wei
(Edit) (Sep 30, 2007)
- Yes, you are right. My mother tongue is Indonesian, and I'm just a beginner. I have a lot of idea in my mind, but I find quite difficult to express them in the English language. Can you give me a suggestion. Thank you, from wei wei.
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