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Horse Ride
Author: SG
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(Added on Sep 22, 2007)
(This month 103771 readers) (Total 133261 readers) |
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A 19yo girl is spending the summer at her uncle's ranch spending her days under the summer's sun naked and in bondage. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8/10) |
Average
Rating: (8.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
StoryBound
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Jul 26, 2008 |
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A very original story, and hot, hot, hot! It was this story that made me starting to read the other stories of SG and I believe most of his stories belong to be the very top of this libary! I know 'horse ride' is my personal all-time favorite! Please keep adding to this great, great story! (10/10)
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Reviewer:
hotgoth14
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Oct 6, 2007 |
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another good storySG but the only bad thing is you always leave us wondering what happens next in all of your stories (9/10)
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Reviewer:
superfreak
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Sep 30, 2007 |
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loved it and got so hot from reading it i cum so hard before i could even get my cock out of my pants! (10/10)
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Reviewer:
hollykesten
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Sep 27, 2007 |
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I liked it, please write more (9/10)
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Reviewer:
chksng19
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Sep 25, 2007 |
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A fairly decent beginning, with some room to grow: I imagine it might get real interesting if the horse were spooked by a coyote or big cat of some kind. Being a horse that goes where he will, perhaps he is a jumper as well? Over the fence might be a significant stretch of the imagination, but also a stretch of our heroine. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 24, 2007 |
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nice story so far, i look forward to more (7/10)
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Reviewer:
Curtis
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Sep 23, 2007 |
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I'm going to echo Spitman's comments about the paragraphs and seperations (there were also several mis-spellings — mostly in chapter one), but my biggest issue is that it is repeatedly stated in chapter three that she's naked, but in chapter two a point was made that she was wearing a tight shirt and short skirt. Did I miss her getting undressed at some point? Anyway, a pretty good story so far. Looking forward to finding out about this scavenger hunt. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
Spitman
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Sep 23, 2007 |
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This was a nicely entertaining short story with some good ideas, and it was well written. I did think the story was a bit short to do justice to the quality of the ideas. Greedy me, I wanted more! It would have made the story more readable if the paragraphs were shorter and separated by a blank line. (7/10)
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