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The Different Business Trip Author: Machine23
(Added on Sep 19, 2007) (This month 65816 readers) (Total 99651 readers)
It's inspired mainly by two stories in the www "A Year of Slavery" and "The Breaking of Dan Newman", So if you find any parrallels, it is intended to be.

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Reviewer: slaveneedledick (Edit) Rating: Mar 8, 2008
To many areas for improvement no real plot and too jumpy making this story hard to read or follow, (2/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Sep 23, 2007
to many areas of improvement needed to list here. just did nothing for me sorry (5/10)

Reviewer: trainmanretep (Edit) Rating: Sep 19, 2007
The title doesn't make much sense. How did the guy get to where he is now.
(4/10)

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