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The Story So Far
Author: Artful Donno
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(Added on Jul 10, 2007)
(This month 56213 readers) (Total 63264 readers) |
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A semi autobiographical story. I and the other main character live on different continents most of the time. From time to time she sends me the beginning of an erotic story. I then complete the story mainly for her delight. This particular story, we have agreed, can be shared with others. It is a story of domination and experiment. We like it, we hope you do too. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Jul 11, 2007 |
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Content is a 9 or even a 10 but the writing leaves a lot to be desired. I think the story would flow much better if you had let your Mistress speak instead of writing "then you tell me, etc." (5/10)
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