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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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sckfck
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Dec 4, 2014 |
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Alright, so it's a list and not a story. It's still good. I'll read some of her stories now, and I really hope she used some of the scenes she described here.
(8/10)
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supiluliuma
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May 8, 2012 |
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look great but it is only a catalog. One or more ideas must be developed. (5/10)
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Polecat
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Jan 5, 2008 |
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This is so hot.
Very original too. It's more a wish list than a story. Would make a great pre-nup. (10/10)
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Pussycat Sam
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Aug 7, 2007 |
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Very different Faye, I liked your approach. And I loved some of your ideas, they made me hornier than I've been reading stuff here all morning! Nice one!
If I were a bloke I'd marry you tomorrow! Shame I'm not really. lol
Keep em coming girl!
Love Sam.
xxx (7/10)
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H Dean
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Jul 14, 2007 |
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My review is based entirely on the fact that is not a story: It's a shopping list. As for the complaints of your use of "negro", I will remind everyone that fiction does not have to be politically correct except for fascists. (1/10)
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bobanddianne
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Jul 13, 2007 |
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Incredibly wild ideas, will there be more? We've dreamed of such things, but never put them in print. (10/10)
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WyldWyl
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Jul 13, 2007 |
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A little troubling in places, but I enjoyed the ideas and found the unorthdox style fun. Good effort! (8/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Jul 12, 2007 |
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This is so not a short story ... but rather a laundry list of what makes you hot. Oh, and it is very politically incorrect to use the word "negroes"! Shame on you!
Seriously ... this is not a story! (1/10)
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bracemaiden
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Jul 10, 2007 |
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I have to agree with kandyecaned that it's not a story, but a list. ie: it lacks character development and plot. The negro remark was also a downer. A few creative ideas though! (6/10)
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badcatholicgirl
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Jul 10, 2007 |
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i very much like it. no I didnt like the negro remark, but anything else is pretty good. I good little maschoist dream (8/10)
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kandyecaned
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Jul 10, 2007 |
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well; It's not a story but a list. You also are racist,(negro remark) and you insult those with autism.
Some of the fantasys are good, but most are grossly unattainable. I enjoy pain humiliation and degradation, but this didn't do much for me. (1/10)
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Rasputins_Memory
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Jul 9, 2007 |
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Some of this stuff is exciting. Some of it is funny. Mainly the piece reels on too long and seems to be satirizing itself. If it is a satire you can go a bit broader (get the pun). If it isn't a satire then you need to consider its pacing and probably edit out some of the items that don't really contribute. It would be much more powerful if you built up a little at a time to the snuff at the end. Just my thoughts, of course. (6/10)
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easyrider27
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Jul 7, 2007 |
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okay, I rated you an eight because it was a good read, but I didn't appreciate the comment about "negros". That was low-class, racist and kind of trashy. Beyond that, it was a good read, though. (8/10)
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Guiller
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Jul 7, 2007 |
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"You'll probably get lots of marriage proposals from it"
Me firstĦĦ :)
(I mean i liked the story) (7/10)
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SimonMagick
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Jul 7, 2007 |
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Some clever masochistic humiliations. You obviously have been masturbating to these ideas for some time, Faye. It turned you into a dumb bunny. You'll probably get lots of marriage proposals from it, but I wouldn't. I would be glad to do about half that stuff to you though. (8/10)
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