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The Palaestra of Grossness
Author: Eric Boss
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(Added on May 29, 2007)
(This month 16480 readers) (Total 31292 readers) |
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n a world where all is dedicated to the service of the hard cock, cunts and cunt-boys are regularly sexually abused, tortured and destroyed in massive public displays. This is organised on an industrial scale, and the thousands and thousands of male clients who make up the audiences are provided with every opportunity to indulge themselves in whatever way they desire. It's a disgusting, violent story of total debauchery, my advice is please only look at it if you know you already like this sort of thing. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 31, 2007 |
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not bad altho beatiality is not a big favorite of mine i loked around it and enjoyed reading it (7/10)
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cowpoke1983
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May 31, 2007 |
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Okay, first off this is a hardcore sexual violence and alternative sex fantasy. However, and from the length of this thing I know you put some effort into it, it comes across as rambling and raving and lacks a story line. There is little in the line of character development, it is extremely cluttered, and at times is hard to read. My suggestion would be to look at some works by authors who use the strong sexual violence theme successfully and tell a good story such as say, Llabmik (mods awfully sorry if I am not supposed to use the works of other authors). You do have promise but as other have said on other stories of yours what may be a fun sounding fantasy to you needs some filtration before it is released to prospective audiences. (4/10)
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chksng19
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May 31, 2007 |
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Well, it's literate and correct in many ways. Overkill? Well, yah... but you were warned. Interesting? Ongoing plot? Well, can't have everything. (6/10)
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heycarrieanne
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May 30, 2007 |
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What the heck was that? I discerned no real story! (4/10)
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loathsome_cunt
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May 30, 2007 |
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Master writes once again, a story that makes this cunt abuse and dream of being nothing but flesh for Him to torture and use as an ashtray, or some other object (10/10)
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Mothbrad
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May 29, 2007 |
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The master of the overviolence - the writer your parents warned you about - returns with his most repulsive and accomplished story yet. Take heed of the warnings - this story is not erotica, and if that's what you're looking for, then chances are you'll hate it. There's parts of this story that I can't read in full, but hell - nobody's got a gun to your head making you read every word. (9/10)
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