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What I Want
Author: Darqside
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(Added on Apr 11, 2007)
(This month 14319 readers) (Total 33489 readers) |
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A man stops at nothing to get what he wants. And he ALWAYS gets what he wants! |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mari<MSBermes>
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Apr 27, 2007 |
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Very good writing style- some good metaphors were used here and then, of which I would have liked to see even more. I enjoyed the chess comparison, and how it was used fairly consistently throughout the story.
Developed at a steady pace, the story took us to the author's end gracefully and arousingly.
Adding to the quality of the story, sexual acts were almost nonexistent, making the story transcend simple physical gratification.
Good job again, darqside! :) (8/10)
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