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The Muse
Author: Darqside
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(Added on Mar 1, 2007)
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A young man enters an Art and Supply store looking for the ideal writing instrument. He gets more than he bargained for. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Koli22
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May 25, 2008 |
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ok (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
dragonfly996
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Mar 2, 2007 |
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The only thing missing are the ghosts and other fantastic beings to become a real Japanese epic... I hope there is more... Thanks (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Mar 2, 2007 |
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Darqside, this review is for you. i see flashes of greatness in your writing, i see that you have a flair for words, but then there pops up an editing mistake, ommission, and i tend to notice it more because of the good flow of writing. it's like the higher the standard of writing is, the more you notice little mistakes. i like the overall plot of the story, although i felt it didnt finish as strongly as the beginning promised. please keep writing, i feel you will become one of the classic writers here when you can polish your stories.
respectfully blu (7/10)
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