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Dunegon Slut Author: W. Hunter
(Added on Feb 11, 2007) (This month 63000 readers) (Total 88460 readers)
Excerpts from the life of my dungeon slut

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Weighed Average (?): (8/10)
Average Rating: (8.5/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Jan 22, 2009
The story is good. It is also well written. But W. Hunter seems to have a weakness for mindless sadists as main characters. Which takes away a lot of the appeal to me.
Okay, so that's personal and I shouldn't take that out on the author. But still.
If only there would have been a means to an end, if the story would have had a purpose, other than letting W. Hunter vent a nasty streak and pour it in some form of prose, I would have been a far happier man.
JJ (8/10)

Reviewer: bonnieb (Edit) Rating: Dec 27, 2008
So it's not polished, but it's still nearly perfect... i'm usually a stickler for say, the title being spelled correctly... but from where i'm coming from this guy gets it. (10/10)

Reviewer: Jaeger (Edit) Rating: Feb 12, 2007
I love the story, although you're writing needs a little work. Good stuff. Hope to see some more. (8/10)

Reviewer: heycarrieanne (Edit) Rating: Feb 11, 2007
This is actually not a bad story, but you keep switching tenses and persons and, in my humble opinion, nothing takes away from a hot story more than poor grammar.
If you tighten that up on the next chapter, I will be happy to raise your score. (7/10)
Replied by: wo_hunter (Edit) (Feb 12, 2007)
Huh? Are you sure you're reviewing the right story?
It's completely written in the present tense (aside from the odd past-perfect phrases, which are necessary at times), from the first person POV.

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