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If Only She'd Said Yes First Time
Author: Pagan
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(Added on Sep 25, 2001)
(This month 11562 readers) (Total 34212 readers) |
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She was raped by the landlord. Later more and more people took advantage of her weakness and made her a total slut. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 23, 2004 |
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complete unrealistic, i still hoever have my sunday newspaper (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
rcb
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Mar 23, 2003 |
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A bit rambling, but all in all a good story (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Willowe13
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Sep 27, 2001 |
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This was utterly horrid! The story may have been enjoyable if it were ledge able. Wow!
Couldn't finish it! Too much! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
ownedgirl
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Sep 25, 2001 |
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So poorly written, i could never really decide if i was enjoying the story or not?? Finally just gave up (5/10)
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- Replied by:
hyphen666
(Edit) (Sep 25, 2001)
- The poor writing is very systematic and seems to have its own unique rules for spelling, punctuation and sentence structure. I think Pagan is having fun with us by writing deliberately in a stream of consciousness style.
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Sep 25, 2001 |
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Reelie licked the spell'in punktwoashun neet use of apostrafees coma's those reelie long centenzez that all'way's ended ina dot, grate plot, itz' reel gud with lots of secs violins umilliea'shun, brenda meat's all theze yung boyz and girl's that're reelie intelagent and fuk'er over gud a long with Sarah her dauter, wunderfull storie by a reelie creative riter, the end! (8/10)
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