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My weekend with the girls Author: wannabme_2000
(Added on Sep 5, 2006) (This month 60250 readers) (Total 88015 readers)
about my attitude with wemen and taught a lessen by two of them. They torture me in many ways and when they let me go..Well thats another story.

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Reviewer: Mist (Edit) Rating: Apr 18, 2008
writing skill is lacking mis spelled many words. (2/10)

Reviewer: MISTRESS H (Edit) Rating: Apr 13, 2008
I was held in a trance, to read some of the devious things that was done to this man. Some of which, were well thought out almost auto-biographical. Then ending was a bit of a surprise, but expected. All in all I would say well done, and keep them cuming.
MISTRESS H (7/10)

Reviewer: gremlin (Edit) Rating: Sep 12, 2006
Paragraphs nonexistant. Constant mis-spellings. Potentially good storyline - but the literary quality is far too distracting to be able to enjoy the story. Don't quit- just have someone edit for you. (2/10)

Reviewer: schoolboylv (Edit) Rating: Sep 7, 2006
Good effort, but your writing skills need a lot of improvement. First off, your paragraphs are way too long. Each of those paragraphs could be split into 3 or 4. There are many grammar and spelling errors. In your synopsis you mispell "women". I don't think you should stop writing, but you need to find yourself a good editor or someone to work with you and try to improve your writing skills. (5/10)

Reviewer: trainmanretep (Edit) Rating: Sep 6, 2006
great idea but the writing skills are lacking. As an english composition this would be D- (3/10)

Reviewer: abitbent (Edit) Rating: Sep 5, 2006
The author has a great imagination, he/she just needs to work on creatively expressing it. Lots of "She then..." and "I..." and not a paragraph to be found. (4/10)

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