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From Child\'s Play to.......?? Author: bondoy
(Added on Jul 26, 2006) (This month 49833 readers) (Total 61151 readers)
Childhood games lead to an adult\'s fantasy and it\'s enaction.

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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
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Reviewer: longhairslavegirl (Edit) Rating: Jul 28, 2006
SUPERB story ! Kept me interested from start to finish! (10/10)

Reviewer: Millie (Edit) Rating: Jul 27, 2006
The storyline was great, I enjoyed it from start to finish, but please read your work, or better still get someone else to do it for you. There were mistakes that spoilt the flow of a very good story.
(8/10)
Replied by: bondoy (Edit) (Jul 27, 2006)
hi Millie
Many thanks for reading and taking the time to review my story.
Many thanks for the very constructive advice.
I have to say that I thought that I did read it thoroughly - several times and I did have another writer who I admire read it for me.
However I will take your suggestions on board as I write my next one.
kind regards
bondoy

Reviewer: jip (Edit) Rating: Jul 27, 2006
Great story and I confirm the opinion of abitbent that it holds you up. Also an end you would not expect! Excellent (9/10)
Replied by: bondoy (Edit) (Jul 27, 2006)
hi jip
Many thanks for your review of my first story. It does encourage me to produce more. There is one already on the drawing board.
Kind Regards
bondoy

Reviewer: abitbent (Edit) Rating: Jul 27, 2006
This story is a lot of fun and holds your attention for the duration. Bondoy this is a great first try and i'm glad you decided to share your imagination with all of us. The character development is wonderful, and the suspense is in all the right places. I hope you'll endeavour to write again. (9/10)
Replied by: bondoy (Edit) (Jul 27, 2006)
Thank you for taking out the time to review my story. And you comments are very encouraging for a new writer like me.
I do intend to continue to write more stories. Reviews like this are great encouragement to keep up the enthusiasm.
I will post my future stories here.
Thanks bondoy

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