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Vivian\'s Story
Author: SummerElizabeth8
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(Added on Jun 22, 2006)
(This month 51661 readers) (Total 62582 readers) |
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Shining Example\" mother recalls her training. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
MISTRESS H
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Dec 23, 2007 |
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The story thus far was well written, and suggested other chapters to follow, I for one will enjoy reading the following chapters. The plot is as you say, right out of the 60's and 70's,very enjoyable for someone who has been there and done that. My congratulations on a good start. (8/10)
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tbear4759
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Jun 4, 2007 |
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a pretty decent start. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 17, 2007 |
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altho i am not gneneraly into narativestories as thisformat is, the story was real good (9/10)
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Mad Lews
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Jun 26, 2006 |
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A cheerful tale building or flashing back from shining example. Either way it's a great read that demands much more from such a talented writer. Don't keep us waiting dear. (9/10)
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jip
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Jun 26, 2006 |
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The story has promises but this part stops before it is getting interesting. Will review again when other parts are added (7/10)
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dyercotomy
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Jun 23, 2006 |
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great start, holds promise for the remainder (9/10)
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bigcat
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Jun 23, 2006 |
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A great beginning: tension, mystery, romance, eroticism, terrific inner life. Look forward to reading more. Take your time. It's good. (9/10)
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